Template:Did you know nominations/Moula Ali hill

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:35, 13 June 2015 (UTC)

Moula Ali hill

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... that "Moula Ali dargah" on Moula Ali hill is the only dargah for Hazrat Ali, son-in-law of Prophet Muhammad all over the world?

ALT1:... that "Moula Ali dargah" on Moula Ali hill is the only dargah for fourth Caliph, Hazrat Ali?
ALT2:... that "Moula Ali dargah" on Moula Ali hill is the only dargah for Hazrat Ali, son-in-law of Prophet Muhammad?

Created by Supdiop (talk). Self-nominated at 06:54, 27 May 2015 (UTC).

. Length, date of posting and references are verified. The third paragraph needs to be cited. Also none of the references say that it is the only dargah for Ali all over the world. Pl suggest an alternative hook.--Nvvchar. 21:13, 28 May 2015 (UTC)

Hi Nvvchar, I added reference to the 3rd sentence, but the reference I added to the previous sentence clearly says It is only dargah for Ali. Google showed some bits of the book, in one bit It says 'Moula Ali dargah' is the only dargah for Ali. The book is relatively new and published by government. Thank you - Supdiop ^talk 23:36, 28 May 2015 (UTC)

. Hook reference is AGF. I prefer ALT2 hook.--Nvvchar. 11:26, 31 May 2015 (UTC)

I also prefer ALT2. I think some improvements can be made to the hook like writing some words in italics to make it look good. Supdiop ^talk 09:59, 5 June 2015 (UTC)