Template:Did you know nominations/Mira Lesmana

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 18:20, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

Mira Lesmana

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... that Mira Lesmana (pictured), whose brother and father are musicians, is a film producer?

ALT1:... that Indonesian film producer Mira Lesmana (pictured) has campaigned several times against censorship in the country's film industry?

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 15:18, 7 May 2012 (UTC)

Reviewed: 1857 Fort Tejon earthquake

Date, length, English sources, photo all fine. No overly close paraphrasing. I prefer your alternate hook. One small thing: I noticed that you mentioned the name of her recording company twice in the article, but I couldn't find the name of her production company in the piece, although it was in your first source. I would definitely work it into the article. Otherwise, everything looks good. Anne (talk) 23:10, 7 May 2012 (UTC)

Done. My bad; I had put it off until I found when she established it, then forgot. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:17, 7 May 2012 (UTC)

All set! Anne (talk) 18:15, 8 May 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:07, 8 May 2012 (UTC)