Template:Did you know nominations/Mercedes Sandoval de Hempel

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:44, 16 May 2015 (UTC)

Mercedes Sandoval de Hempel

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... that Mercedes Sandoval de Hempel was nominated by CLADEM Paraguay as a candidate for the "1000 Women for the Nobel Peace Prize 2005"?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Leggetts Creek

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk) and Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 16:17, 2 May 2015 (UTC).

Good to know her, the sources look fine, but I have to accept them AGF. I can see that the hook is supported, but suggest to shorten it, not holding up reading by an unknown abbreviated organization, avoiding links to things other than the subject to focus interest, to

ALT1: ... that Mercedes Sandoval de Hempel was nominated in Paraguay for "1000 Women for the Nobel Peace Prize 2005"?

Please translate the remaining names of organizations. If you can find a bit more about what they actually do, even better. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:14, 16 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Gerda. ALT1 is fine. --Rosiestep (talk) 17:24, 16 May 2015 (UTC)

ALT1 preferred, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:36, 16 May 2015 (UTC)