Template:Did you know nominations/Melody (Spanish singer)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:47, 25 December 2019 (UTC)
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Melody (Spanish singer)
Melody in 2015
- ... that Melody (pictured) was rumoured to be dead?
- ALT1:... that due to Melody's (pictured) three-year disappearance from the public eye, she was rumoured to be dead?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hans Braun (baritone)
- Comment: The article is still undergoing some work.
5x expanded by Moscow Connection (talk). Self-nominated at 13:59, 7 November 2019 (UTC).
Hi, I started to review the article and realized that it's not at all finished. There is a lot of hidden text. Please let me know when it's ready for review. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 23:09, 18 November 2019 (UTC)
- - @Moscow Connection: It's been a couple of weeks since your last edits to the article, is the expansion finished now? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 08:31, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
- I'm very sorry, I will finish everything by Monday or Tuesday. --Moscow Connection (talk) 15:52, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
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- I'm working on the article right now. (Too many distractions, sorry.) The ping didn't work, btw. --Moscow Connection (talk) 00:59, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
- @Moscow Connection: Is everything fine now? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:40, 11 December 2019 (UTC)
- I've sourced everything that wasn't sourced, but I wanted to make a few minor changes and to remove some duplicate. Can you please wait a couple of days? I'll ping you. --Moscow Connection (talk) 01:52, 11 December 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: It's finished now. --Moscow Connection (talk) 08:59, 15 December 2019 (UTC)
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- @Yoninah: It's been three days since your last comment here, will you still be able to review this? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:50, 18 December 2019 (UTC)
This looks like a 2x BLP expansion beginning on October 30. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. As all sources are in Spanish, unable to check for close paraphrasing. Both hooks are good, though I wonder if "the Spanish singer" should be put in front of her name in ALT0. I think ALT1 would work better with the image. Foreign-language hook refs AGF and cited inline. Image is freely licensed. QPQ done. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 22:02, 19 December 2019 (UTC)
- Actually, it is a 5× expansion. To be exact, a 6× one. At least, before it was copyedited by the Guild of Copy Editors. Cause I expanded it from less than 2,000 characters as of 3:13 on October 31 to 12,000. (Update. It's at 10,800 now. I think some stuff should be added back, especially the part about the Los Vivancos' withdrawal, but I'm afraid to touch the article now. It definitely sounds much better overall than before the copyedit..)
Yes, it was an unsourced BLP, but I expanded it five-fold when I learnt that the 2× expansion rule was now deprecated, .
And thank you so much for reviewing this! --Moscow Connection (talk) 04:59, 20 December 2019 (UTC)
- Actually, it is a 5× expansion. To be exact, a 6× one. At least, before it was copyedited by the Guild of Copy Editors. Cause I expanded it from less than 2,000 characters as of 3:13 on October 31 to 12,000. (Update. It's at 10,800 now. I think some stuff should be added back, especially the part about the Los Vivancos' withdrawal, but I'm afraid to touch the article now. It definitely sounds much better overall than before the copyedit..)
- @Yoninah: It's been three days since your last comment here, will you still be able to review this? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:50, 18 December 2019 (UTC)
