Template:Did you know nominations/Melani Leimena Suharli

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:05, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

Melani Leimena Suharli

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• ...that despite her entire extended family being Christians, Melani Leimena Suharli adheres to Islam? Source: "Di keluarga besar, Melani merupakan satu-satunya dari keluarga yang beragama Islam."

• Reviewed: Joe Hillier

Moved to mainspace by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 04:10, 2 January 2019 (UTC).

• I kind of like the hook but is there something better that can be mentioned here? The hook fact isn't exactly uncommon, and considering Indonesia is a predominantly Muslim country, this is probably not too uncommon there either. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 10:17, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

• @Narutolovehinata5: Alternatively, you can go with ALT1: ...that daughter of Indonesian Christian Party founder Johannes Leimena, Melani Leimena Suharli, is Muslim? Still the Christian-Muslim thing, but with extra info. Juxlos (talk) 01:01, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

• That's a much better hook, and as such I've struck the original. So the article checks out in terms of creation date, stability, and length, and I wasn't able to detect close paraphrasing. The source is in Indonesian but was verified via Google Translate, and it's also used as an inline citation for the hook. QPQ done. Should be good to go now with ALT1, which should be interesting to a broad audience. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 01:24, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

• Hi, I came by to promote this, but I don't see the hook fact in the article. I also suggest you eliminate the sea of blue links by writing the alt this way:
• ALT1a: ... that politician Melani Leimena Suharli, the daughter of the founder of the Indonesian Christian Party, is Muslim? Yoninah (talk) 22:39, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

• @Yoninah: New alt flows better I think. Added the Christian Party's name to the article, but the hook fact is still taken from 2 separate sentences. Juxlos (talk) 22:45, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

• That's fine. New foreign-language hook ref AGF and cited inline. Rest of review per Narutolovehinata5. ALT1a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:03, 3 January 2019 (UTC)