Template:Did you know nominations/Mason Morgan

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The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 00:54, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

Mason Morgan

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~~... that actor Orpheus Pledger had to relocate from Melbourne to Sydney when he was offered the role of Mason Morgan in Home and Away?~~ Source: "I was still living at home (in Melbourne) with my mum and my brother when, out of nowhere, all these things started happening and I was faced with the choice of, 'You have been offered this role and – if you want it – you are going to have to relocate to Sydney'."

Reviewed: RedditGifts
Comment: Please feel free to tweak the hook, or suggest another.

Moved to mainspace by JuneGloom07 (talk). Self-nominated at 16:22, 10 April 2018 (UTC).

Reviewing... Initial thought: does it contain too much detail? violet/riga _^[talk] 20:04, 28 April 2018 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The storyline section is quite long and may well grow so that needs to be kept in check, but it's a decent hook and this is GTG. violet/riga _^[talk] 20:17, 28 April 2018 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this, but I really don't see what's hooky about it for a worldwide audience. I understand you have to say something about the real world; how about:
ALT1: ... that a year after the character of Mason Morgan was introduced on Home and Away, his curly hair disappeared due to actor Orpheus Pledger's new hairstyle? Yoninah (talk) 23:45, 28 April 2018 (UTC)

I'm happy to go with that one, thank you Yoninah. - JuneGloom07 Talk 23:56, 28 April 2018 (UTC)

Thanks. Pinging @Violetriga: for review of ALT1. Yoninah (talk) 00:06, 29 April 2018 (UTC)

Yeah I'm happy with ALT1 and its source. violet/riga _^[talk] 11:19, 29 April 2018 (UTC)