Template:Did you know nominations/Masey McLain

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 14:18, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Masey McLain

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• ... that American actress Masey McLain's feature film debut in I'm Not Ashamed was praised by film critic Jordan Hoffman, who said of her acting future, "The sky is the limit"? Source: The Guardian (October 21, 2016)
  • ALT1:... that American actress Masey McLain portrayed murdered student Rachel Scott in the film I'm Not Ashamed about the Columbine High School massacre?

• Reviewed: Over the Hill (1931 film)

5x expanded by JGHowes (talk). Self-nominated at 18:56, 10 October 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: ALT0 and ALT1 both check out with the same citation. This nomination looks OK to me, except that it doesn't read as neutral, since the reviews are mixed up with the film facts. I strongly suggest that you create a separate Reviews section, and put all the reviews (excluding her own comments) in that new section. If we can sort this out, then I believe that this nominmation should be OK. Storye book (talk) 20:35, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

• Thank you for the review and suggestion. I pride myself on strict adherence to npov, so your point is well-taken. and I'll work on that tonite. @Storye book: it's now re-organized accordingly.  JGHowes  ^talk_

• Thank you for your article edits - that solves the neutrality problem really well. I should add that I am happy with both hooks. Good to go.