Template:Did you know nominations/Mary Bartlett Dixon

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 12:42, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

Mary Bartlett Dixon

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Mary Bartlett Dixon

... that nurse and suffragette Mary Bartlett Dixon (pictured) helped establish Easton, Maryland's first hospital? Message from Charles Capute
- ALT1:... that Mary Bartlett Dixon (pictured), who was only admitted to Johns Hopkins School of Nursing due to her father, helped establish Easton, Maryland's first hospital? Biographical Sketch of Mary Bartlett Dixon Cullen, Message from Charles Capute

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Carolina Watchman

Created by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Self-nominated at 19:53, 25 October 2019 (UTC).

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: New enough and long enough article. I personally don't like ALT1 as I feel it emphasizes her success being only due to her family, though both hooks are sourced and cited. You need a QPQ. No textual problems. Ping me when you have a QPQ. Raymie (t • c) 22:42, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

Raymie, QPQ done. I didn't realize ALT1 came off that way. I was trying to show that although she wasn't believed in, she still succeeded. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:26, 28 October 2019 (UTC)

It seems like it was significant to her life story, but for someone reading the hook, it could give another impression. QPQ is up, so here's the accompanying tick. Raymie (t • c) 18:28, 28 October 2019 (UTC)