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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Montanabw(talk) 05:29, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
Original hook,

Martian lava tubes

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Transverse cross-section of a martian lava tube

  • ... that 7th grade science students at Evergreen Middle School in Cottonwood, California helped researchers discover a new series of Martian lava tubes (pictured)?
  • ALT1:... that the interior of Martian lava tubes (pictured) could prove to be a prime locations for future manned missions by providing shelter for habitats?
  • Reviewed: 2012 VP113

Created by Melissausburn (talk). Nominated by Maile66 (talk) at 22:41, 9 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Article has been created within 5 days of the nomination. But there are a few comments to fix. First off, the sentence at the end of the lead is not mentioned in the article, so it is unsourced. The bullet list under the section "Detection and access" should not have the ref on the last bullet, the ref should be moved after the colon before, symbolizing that it supports the whole list. When these are fixed the article should be good to go. Oh, and I would go with the original, not ALT1. IJReid (talk) 14:21, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
Both issues are taken care of. Sentence at the end of the lead is now mentioned in the article and sourced. Moved the ref at the colon to back up where it supports the whole list. — Maile (talk) 20:15, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
Sorry, I was busy for a bit, but here . IJReid (talk) 14:00, 11 April 2014 (UTC)