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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:50, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
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Marsden Rock
- ... that the naturally-formed arch of Marsden Rock (pictured) collapsed in 1996 following a winter of storms? Source: Johnson, Doris (2001). The Millennium Remembered. South Tyneside. Great Britain: Petersons Printing Ltd. ISBN 0-906617-35-9. Retrieved 9 January 2022 – via Internet Archive. URL: https://archive.org/details/millenniumrememb0000john/page/76/mode/2up
- Comment: QPQ requirement - only have 1 DYK credit currently.
Improved to Good Article status by Unexpectedlydian (talk). Self-nominated at 13:12, 16 January 2022 (UTC).
- Starting review. Zeete (talk) 12:49, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
- Hi Zeete, I have noticed that the reference I have used is not accessible to everyone as it is a Google Books preview, also it does not mention a storm. Could I request that the reference for this DYK is changed to ref no.23 in the article (Orr, Robyn. 30 May 2016) and the words “following a storm” are removed from the hook? Do let me know if I should make this request via a different means. Many thanks Unexpectedlydian (talk) 13:28, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
- I had no problem with the reference listed here. Ref 11 says "Early in 1996, after a winter of harsh storms", not a particular storm. Please update hook as you see fit and/or add alternate hooks, then I will finish the review, Thanks, Zeete (talk) 13:43, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you - I have amended the hook to make clear there were multiple storms. Unexpectedlydian (talk) 09:40, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
- Review: New, promoted to GA, long enough (over 6,500 per DYK check), cited, neutral, Earwig reported Violation Unlikely (22.5%, due to quotation), QPQ not needed (1 previous credit), hook interesting, length checked ok, wording and citation issue, see below, picture looks good.
- Article needs to agree with hook wording change and appropriate citations. Thanks, Zeete (talk) 13:10, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
- I've altered the article to make it align with the hook and changed the reference. Hope that works. Unexpectedlydian (talk) 18:28, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
- I was referring to the sentence in the lede that says "collapsed in 1996 following a storm", not the one in the body. Thanks, Zeete (talk) 19:05, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
- Ah, got it. I've changed the lede now. Thank you Unexpectedlydian (talk) 19:09, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
Promoting the main hook (ALT0) to Prep 5, with the image. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:50, 30 January 2022 (UTC)