Template:Did you know nominations/Maria Luigia Pizzoli

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 15:06, 14 June 2024 (UTC)

Maria Luigia Pizzoli

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Maria Luigia Pizzoli

... that Italian pianist and composer Maria Luigia Pizzoli (pictured) shortly after her first public appearance due to a heart disease?

Source: In 1837, at just twenty years old, the girl made her first public appearance....she died in 1838

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mary Ann Wells

Created by SL93 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 405 past nominations.

SL93 (talk) 15:21, 7 June 2024 (UTC).

ALT1: ... that Italian pianist and composer Maria Luigia Pizzoli (pictured) posthumously received the title of Maestro di Contrappunto (Master of Counterpoint)? SL93 (talk) 02:54, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Source: Due to the high reputation that Maria Luigia Pizzoli enjoyed throughout her life, the "Allgemeine Musical Zeitung" assumes in an obituary that the deceased was close to "being accepted into the Bolognese Accademia Filarmonica as Maestro di Contrappunto" (AmZ 1838, col. 445). On October 16, 1840, she was actually given this honor posthumously.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The article was created on June 7. It has a readable prose size of 1935 characters. QPQ was done. The picture is free, clear, and used in the article. WP:EARWIG shows no copyvios. Every paragraph in the body of the article has a reference. The text is written from a neutral point of view. The hooks are cited, interesting, and not too long. I think ALT0 is better. But it misses the word "died" or a similar term.

ALT0a: ... that Italian pianist and composer Maria Luigia Pizzoli (pictured) died shortly after her first public appearance due to a heart disease?

For the sake of brevity of ALT1, you could consider removing the translation of the title, which is probably not very helpful to readers anyways:

ALT1a: ... that Italian pianist and composer Maria Luigia Pizzoli (pictured) posthumously received the title of Maestro di Contrappunto? Phlsph7 (talk) 09:17, 12 June 2024 (UTC)

Phlsph7 I accidentally left out the word "died". I'm also fine with ALT1a. SL93 (talk) 20:43, 12 June 2024 (UTC)

I didn't spot any other issues.

Approve ALT0a, ALT1, and ALT1a. My personal preference is ALT0a. Phlsph7 (talk) 07:56, 13 June 2024 (UTC)