Template:Did you know nominations/Maria Eugenia Bozzoli
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:22, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
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Maria Eugenia Bozzoli
[edit]- ... that Maria Eugenia Bozzoli was one of the founders of anthropology in Costa Rica?
- ALT1:... that Maria Eugenia Bozzoli was Costa Rica's first woman anthropologist?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Shmuel Schecter
- Comment: Hook has two inline citations supporting it (Hartney, p. 147; Society for Applied Anthropology, p. 58). ALT1 is supported by the "Penland, p. 124" inline citation.
Created by Rosiestep (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk), and Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 02:03, 5 February 2017 (UTC).
Thank you, team, for meeting an interesting woman, on good sources, Spanish source accepted AGF, no copyio obvious. I prefer the original hook, - don't like "first" in hooks ;) - Before approving I have a few wishes for the article:
- The lead could be more of a summary instead of repeating when she started working and the length of some term, for example.
- "... work has been into ..." is not a phrase I know, - should I learn it?
- "She has worked with government institutes on numerous occasions" - I don't think that needs to be said at all, certainly not in a summary.
- Even the prizes might be summarized, instead of all these colourful names.
- To have a 1975 date under "education" looks funny.
- The quote in the Career section needs a ref right behind it.
- "mainly been concentrated" - the article is long enough, we don't need redundancy ;)
- In the second para there, we have "Bozzoli" three sentences in a row.
- Acclaim - don't think that's a frequent header, but may be wrong.
- "as well as daughter, Leticia," looks strange.
- Good reading! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:29, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, Gerda Arendt. I believe I've addressed the comments mentioned. --Rosiestep (talk) 23:48, 23 February 2017 (UTC)
thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:18, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, Gerda Arendt. I believe I've addressed the comments mentioned. --Rosiestep (talk) 23:48, 23 February 2017 (UTC)
