Template:Did you know nominations/Manta, Manta
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:39, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
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Manta, Manta
[edit]- ... that Michael Kessler and Til Schweiger started their film acting career with Manta, Manta?
Created by Skr15081997 (talk). Self nominated at 09:51, 26 April 2014 (UTC).
From a DYK perspective, this article is new enough and long enough and the hook facts are well sourced. However, reading through the plot section, I find it quite difficult to follow. For example, what does this mean - "He is upset because Bertie told him during a stopover for pigeons that his father was having a private conversaion with a dirty radio intern called Florentine(Lena Sabine Berg)." Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:46, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
- Cwmhiraeth, thanks for the review. I will do the necessary corrections soon.--Skr15081997 (talk) 11:22, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
- Cwmhiraeth, I have rewritten the plot to make it more clear.--Skr15081997 (talk) 12:48, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
This article meets the DYK criteria of newness and length and the hook fact has an inline citation. I have done some more copyediting and I think the plot text is OK now. I do not believe you need to do a QPQ review as I don't think you have had any DYKs before. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:14, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
