Template:Did you know nominations/Madhulika Ramteke
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 04:05, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
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Madhulika Ramteke
- ... that Madhulika Ramteke set up a microfinance bank to support women in Chhattisgarh? Source: http://www.apnikheti.com/progressivefarmers/women-to-be-financially/
Moved to mainspace by Mujinga (talk). Self-nominated at 12:55, 4 May 2022 (UTC).
- Alt1 ... that Madhulika Ramteke's microfinance bank for Indian women grew to have over 5,000 "branches"?
- Congratulations, our plagiarism tool cannot find any textual similarity with your sources - well done. Your article is long enough, neutral and it and the hook are referenced. I have suggested an alt hook that you may agree is interesting. The main hook doesnt tell us how successful she has been (her bank could have made no loans and gone bankrupt in a week). Could you consider this? Your existing hook just needs a bit more "wow" I think. Victuallers (talk) 20:13, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the suggestion! I've added the source here. Mujinga (talk) 08:31, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
- fine for Alt1. Alt0 is OK too but not preferred. Most of review is above. The image is by India gov so ok. Its neutral and its gtg. thanks Mujinga. Victuallers (talk) 22:57, 15 May 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the suggestion! I've added the source here. Mujinga (talk) 08:31, 8 May 2022 (UTC)