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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 22:14, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
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Małgorzata Kalinowska-Iszkowska
- ... that Małgorzata Kalinowska-Iszkowska was awarded a Polish Gold Cross of Merit for her work in information technology? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Green to Gold (album)
ALT1 ... that IT expert Małgorzata Kalinowska-Iszkowska, who worked with the International Congress of Women was awarded a Polish Gold Cross of Merit?ALT2 ... that IT expert Małgorzata Kalinowska-Iszkowska, who was President of Poland's Congress of Women, was awarded a Polish Gold Cross of Merit?source- ALT3 ... that IT expert Małgorzata Kalinowska-Iszkowska, who was a member of Poland's Congress of Women, was awarded a Polish Gold Cross of Merit?
Created by Paul2520 (talk). Self-nominated at 16:15, 13 October 2021 (UTC).
- @Paul2520: In progress. Its long enough and well referenced and neutral. No sign of close paraphrasing. Hook is reffed and OK for length but not very interesting as is Alt1 (which I created). The ref for that seems broken and it refers to the International Congress of Women which appears to have been active before 1930. Can this be investigated? Victuallers (talk) 10:05, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Victuallers: The URL is dead, so use the archive URL (included in the citation). Specifically, I recommend the PDF linked from that ref (more info, but directly referencing means you miss the intro page with photo).
- It's a good point though -- not the same organization. I've amended the page accordingly. I don't know if ALT1 can be amended with a different language Wikilink? Or just say the text ("...worked with the Polish Kongres Kobiet (Congress of Women)..."). What do you think? = paul2520 💬 13:54, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Paul2520: Oh with the link we can say more .... see alt2 Victuallers (talk) 13:09, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Victuallers:
according to that link, it looks to me like she was President from 2016-2019. Do you agree? I added a comma to ALT2; otherwise it's fine but I think we should say "was" instead of "is".That link does not have her name, only different Małgorzatas. = paul2520 💬 13:29, 17 October 2021 (UTC)- Problems resolved. As a result I have been able to construct Alt2. So good to go. Alt2 was overchecked by nominator. The source is provided. Victuallers (talk) 13:35, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Victuallers: what do you think of ALT3 instead? See my previous comment about the problem with ALT2. = paul2520 💬 13:40, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- I think I will pause - you put a line (twice) through stuff I'm trying to add a reference to. Victuallers (talk) 13:43, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Victuallers: The link you shared above does not mention her. Do you have a different reference? = paul2520 💬 13:45, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- I think I will pause - you put a line (twice) through stuff I'm trying to add a reference to. Victuallers (talk) 13:43, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Victuallers: what do you think of ALT3 instead? See my previous comment about the problem with ALT2. = paul2520 💬 13:40, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- Problems resolved. As a result I have been able to construct Alt2. So good to go. Alt2 was overchecked by nominator. The source is provided. Victuallers (talk) 13:35, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Victuallers:
- @Paul2520: Oh with the link we can say more .... see alt2 Victuallers (talk) 13:09, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Paul2520: Bit of confusion on my part, but this is good to go. Nice work Paul. Victuallers (talk) 08:08, 20 October 2021 (UTC)