The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 14:29, 16 October 2018 (UTC)
Overall: The source in the article next to the hook references pages 473 to 480, while the claim actually stated in the hook is found on page 477. You should cite to that specific page in the article, not just the range. If the preceding sentence is cited within that range, then it should cite a specific page. Ergo Sum 15:51, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
@Ergo Sum: I have rearranged the citations so that the page numbers are more specific. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:08, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
Good to go. Ergo Sum 18:33, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but there is a missing URL note in footnote 5. Yoninah (talk) 19:36, 15 October 2018 (UTC)