Template:Did you know nominations/Lojze Slak
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:26, 12 October 2011 (UTC)
Lojze Slak
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- ... that Lojze Slak, a virtuoso on diatonic button accordion, also performed at rock concerts?
Created/expanded by Tone (talk). Self nom at 22:11, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
– There are two main problems with the article. Main one is that citations are not formatted properly, just hideous bare URLs; second is MOS issue, article is written like an essay. Knock me when this is ready. — Bill william comptonTalk 21:56, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
- Hi. Refs fixed. Regarding the essay issue, introducing chapters would make not much sense as they would be very short. Any suggestion how to improve it? --Tone 17:01, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
- One or two sectional divisions would look better, like "Early life and career", "Artistry", etc. — Bill william comptonTalk 19:50, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
- Like this? --Tone 22:27, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
Article checked for newness, length, inline formatted citations. AGF on references as all sources are in Slovene. Hook is of proper length, interesting enough, image is okay in terms of licensing, good to go now. — Bill william comptonTalk 12:25, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
- One or two sectional divisions would look better, like "Early life and career", "Artistry", etc. — Bill william comptonTalk 19:50, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
- Hi. Refs fixed. Regarding the essay issue, introducing chapters would make not much sense as they would be very short. Any suggestion how to improve it? --Tone 17:01, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
