Template:Did you know nominations/Live at Bush Hall

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 21:26, 27 March 2023 (UTC)

Live at Bush Hall

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... that in the video for Live at Bush Hall, Black Country, New Road created three distinct themes to avoid it looking like it was only one performance? Source: NME: The film cuts from one performance to another between songs, the completely different visuals for each one reflecting a desire to undercut the way supposedly ‘live’ sessions are often the result of several takes stitched together to appear slicker.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tobi Oluwayemi

Created by Anarchyte (talk). Self-nominated at 04:01, 22 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Live at Bush Hall; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 05:59, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

@Anarchyte and Cunard: To me, ALT0 seems kind of "meh" and doesn't do justice to the content. How about something like:

ALT1:...that for Live at Bush Hall, the band Black Country, New Road created three distinct backstories for its performances, including a pizza chef's encounter with a poltergeist?

Cielquiparle (talk) 05:16, 23 March 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for this suggestion, Cielquiparle (talk · contribs). I think that this hook would be more interesting. The source says:
A new film, ‘Live At Bush Hall’, premiered online on Monday, and is made up of footage filmed across three shows in west London at the end of last year. Each has its own unique theme, for which the band (under the collective pseudonym Hubert Dalcrosse) penned a brief synopsis for a different fictional theatrical performance. They are, respectively, ‘When The Whistle Thins’, about a council of Somerset farmers’ quarterly harvest summit, ‘I Ain’t Alfredo No Ghosts’, about a beloved pizza chef’s encounter with a poltergeist, and ‘The Taming Of The School’, a 1980s prom-themed caper.
Would the hook be paraphrasing the source too closely? Cunard (talk) 05:26, 23 March 2023 (UTC)

How about...

ALT1a: ... that for Live at Bush Hall, the band Black Country, New Road created three distinct backstories for its performances, including one about a pizza chef who comes across a poltergeist?

Cielquiparle (talk) 05:46, 23 March 2023 (UTC)

Verified for ALT1a. Thank you, Cielquiparle (talk · contribs)! Cunard (talk) 05:57, 23 March 2023 (UTC)