Template:Did you know nominations/Lili Almog

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The result was: promoted by SSTflyer 10:01, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Lili Almog

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... that Lili Almog exhibited a photographic series titled "Perfect Intimacy" in 2006, specifically made by her in three Carmel monasteries in Haifa, Bethlehem, and Port Tobacco?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Lenchu Kunzang

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 07:10, 19 May 2016 (UTC).

age and size ok, article neutral. Hook cited and faithful to source material. Some meanings were changed and I needed to copyedit the prose for grammar. Looks better now, but this sentence "Her multimedia photographs reflect how the image of man evolved in art during the last 400 years" is about a single exhibition not her work, and needs to be moved elsewhere. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:27, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

Casliber Thanks for the review and edits. I have shifted the above referred sentence to the end of biography section.Nvvchar. 08:41, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

ok good to go. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:19, 25 May 2016 (UTC)