Template:Did you know nominations/Liam Millar
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:37, 12 April 2018 (UTC)
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Liam Millar
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Millar playing for Liverpool U18s
- ... that Canadian professional soccer player Liam Millar (pictured) moved from Toronto to England as a 13 year old to play with the Fulham F.C. Academy? Source: North Mississauga Soccer Club "Liam left NMSC for the UK at 13. Liam then spent 3 1/2 years at Fulham FC before being signed by LFC this summer."
- ALT1:... that Canadian professional soccer player Liam Millar (pictured) scored a hat-trick in his debut for Liverpool U18s against Blackburn? Source: The Empire of The Kop "Liam Millar scored a hat-trick on his youth debut at the weekend. The 16-year-old Canadian, who only arrived at the club in the summer, was the star of the show as we thrashed Blackburn U18s 4-0 on the opening day of the new season."
Created by Jith12 (talk) and Sixtrap (talk). Nominated by Jith12 (talk) at 21:04, 18 March 2018 (UTC).
Length, history and reference verified. However, running it through the copyvio detector suggests the use of quotes from the club's blog post about him needs to be trimmed back considerably. Daniel Case (talk) 04:40, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Daniel Case: Hi! Thanks for the review. Should I remove the quotes from the article to revise the copyvio problem? Is there anything else that I should do to fix the article? Thanks, Jith12 (talk) 15:55, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Jith12: Just trim the quotes down. Actually, I think you could do with just trimming that one large blockquote down, i.e. paraphrasing most of it and just using a sentence or two, at most, inline. Daniel Case (talk) 03:27, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Daniel Case: I made the block quote shorter; it is now it is one sentence and a part of the "Early Career" main paragraph. I also removed the quote in the "International Career" section as it wasn't very relevant to the content of the section. How is the article now? Jith12 (talk) 00:07, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
@Jith12: Much better now. Good to go. Daniel Case (talk) 05:43, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Daniel Case: I made the block quote shorter; it is now it is one sentence and a part of the "Early Career" main paragraph. I also removed the quote in the "International Career" section as it wasn't very relevant to the content of the section. How is the article now? Jith12 (talk) 00:07, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Jith12: Just trim the quotes down. Actually, I think you could do with just trimming that one large blockquote down, i.e. paraphrasing most of it and just using a sentence or two, at most, inline. Daniel Case (talk) 03:27, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Daniel Case: Hi! Thanks for the review. Should I remove the quotes from the article to revise the copyvio problem? Is there anything else that I should do to fix the article? Thanks, Jith12 (talk) 15:55, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
