Template:Did you know nominations/Laura Fortman

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:04, 16 July 2016 (UTC)

Laura Fortman

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Laura Fortman

• ... that as executive director of the Maine Women's Lobby from 1993 to 2003, Laura Fortman (pictured) successfully lobbied for the passage of laws benefiting reproductive rights, victims' rights, and equal pay for equal work?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mason Cox
• Comment: Created for Women in Red Women in Halls of Fame editathon

Created by Yoninah (talk). Self-nominated at 23:38, 7 July 2016 (UTC).

• Some issues found.
  • ✓ This article is new and was created on 21:26, 07 July 2016 (UTC)
  • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 3511 characters
  • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
    • Note that this is a biographical article about a living person. All claims must be cited to a reliable source.
  • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
  • ✗ There is possible close paraphrasing on this article with 45.1% confidence. (confirm)
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• No overall issues detected
  • ✓ The media File:Laura Fortman at U.S. Department of Labor signing ceremony 2014.jpg is free-use
  • ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 197 characters
  • ✓ Yoninah has 238 DYK credits. A QPQ review of Template:Did you know nominations/Mason Cox was performed for this nomination.

Automatically reviewed by DYKReviewBot. This bot is experimental; please report any issues. This is not a substitute for a human review. --DYKReviewBot (report bugs) 01:28, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

Article is long enough. It is written from a neutral POV. The article features proper citations, and the hook is cited. The image is fine. No copyvio or close paraphrasing detected. When I check the length of the hook it comes out as 210... but I'm probably doing something wrong since the bot says it's 197, and I know you know what you're doing. Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 21:38, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

• @Amgisseman(BYU): "(pictured)" isn't counted in the character count, but actually, the hook is over 200 char without it. Here is an alt:
• ALT1: ... that as executive director of the Maine Women's Lobby from 1993 to 2003, Laura Fortman (pictured) successfully lobbied for laws benefiting reproductive rights, victims' rights, and equal pay for equal work? Yoninah (talk) 18:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

• Thanks! ALT1 looks good!Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 18:56, 11 July 2016 (UTC)