Template:Did you know nominations/Lalitgiri,Udayagiri
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:19, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
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Lalitgiri, Udayagiri
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- ... that Lalitgiri is a major Buddhist complex comprising major stupas, "esoteric" images of Buddha (pictured), and monasteries, together with Ratnagiri and Udayagiri known as forming a Diamond Triangle?
5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 01:34, 11 April 2015 (UTC).
- 5X expansion on both articles checks out. Dates are good. Ran copyvio checks on three online sources, only found short phrases repeated but looks good for paraphrasing. The hook is a bit unwieldy. Propose ALT 1:
- ... that Lalitgiri (statue of Buddha pictured), a major Buddhist complex in India, forms part of the "Diamond Triangle" with nearby sites Ratnagiri and Udayagiri? The Interior (Talk) 20:16, 10 May 2015 (UTC)
- @The Interior: Thanks for the review. I agree with the proposed ALT 1 hook. --Nvvchar. 02:06, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
New reviewer needed to check previous reviewer's ALT1 hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:31, 18 May 2015 (UTC)
As mentioned in the original review, both articles are plenty long enough, and a sufficiently expanded. The nomination was made in the right time, and there no evidence of copyvio or significant close-paraphrasing. ALT1 is a definite improvement on the original hook; my only suggestion would be that it runs without the image, as "(statue of Buddha pictured)" is quite unwieldy, though I'll leave it to the judgement of the promoting reviewer. Good to go. Harrias talk 10:29, 24 May 2015 (UTC)
