Template:Did you know nominations/Lü Ban (director)
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:32, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
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Lü Ban (director)
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- ... that Chinese film director Lü Ban was banned from film-making for life for his satirical comedies, the last of which, also banned, discussed the topic of film censorship? Source: http://www.jstor.org/stable/41482537 and https://books.google.co.kr/books?id=jzQ9AAAAIAAJ&pg=PA77&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false and the topic of film censorship in his last film is mentioned in the prior ref and more explicitly https://books.google.com/books?id=pcf9CAAAQBAJ&pg=PA253
Created by Piotrus (talk). Self-nominated at 08:26, 30 October 2018 (UTC).
@Piotrus: The hook needs to be rewritten: it seems to lack focus (mentioning two hook facts instead of one), and it's hard to read. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 13:07, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- Seriously? That's a very personal view. I re-read the hook and I think it is fine. And I did write ~~1,000 hooks in the past, so it's not like I am an n00b. Let's wait for a proper review and a 3O on that. (And if I got a few days, maybe I'll make it a double-article DYK, addressing your issue, at least, partially). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:54, 31 October 2018 (UTC)
- I meant to say is that the current hook could be rewritten to make it tighter. The hook itself is interesting, it just needs a bit of improvement. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:16, 31 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: I can't figure out how to make it tighter, but I wrote the other article I mentioned and linked it in the hook. Perhaps this addresses your concerns? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:14, 1 November 2018 (UTC)
- I think the hook reads fine, and is very hooky. I formatted the DYK template and credits. Do you have another QPQ to offer for the second article? Yoninah (talk) 21:59, 6 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Oh, didn't think we needed two for that, but sure, here we go: Template:Did you know nominations/Helza Cameu. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:50, 7 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: I can't figure out how to make it tighter, but I wrote the other article I mentioned and linked it in the hook. Perhaps this addresses your concerns? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:14, 1 November 2018 (UTC)
- I meant to say is that the current hook could be rewritten to make it tighter. The hook itself is interesting, it just needs a bit of improvement. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:16, 31 October 2018 (UTC)
