Template:Did you know nominations/Komm, Gott Schöpfer, Heiliger Geist

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The result was: promoted by Harrias ^talk 11:17, 24 May 2015 (UTC)

Komm, Gott Schöpfer, Heiliger Geist

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... that Arnold Schönberg arranged Bach's chorale partita on Luther's hymn for Pentecost "Komm, Gott Schöpfer, Heiliger Geist" (tune and beginning pictured), a paraphrase of "Veni Creator Spiritus"?

Reviewed: La Promenade (1870 Renoir)
Comment: for Pentecost, 24 May

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 11:18, 9 May 2015 (UTC).

Article new enough, long enough, neutral, stable, sourced, image acceptable, hook short enough, I would suggest "melody" instead of "tune" but not a big deal, and perhaps wikilink Pentecost for the benefit of non-religious readers, but also not a deal-breaker. If character count is close, perhaps "Pentecost hymn" instead of "hymn for Pentecost" eliminates the word "for" and those three characters could allow room for "tune" to be replace by the more classical-sounding "melody". Good to go, but tweaks would be OK with me too... Montanabw^(talk) 00:49, 24 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for looking. If this appears today, there's no need for a link to Pentecost because it is bold under OTD.

ALT1: ... that Arnold Schönberg arranged Bach's chorale partita on Luther's hymn for Pentecost "Komm, Gott Schöpfer, Heiliger Geist", a paraphrase of "Veni Creator Spiritus"? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:06, 24 May 2015 (UTC)