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The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by RoySmith talk 22:57, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
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Kim Hye-seon
- ... that South Korean comedian Kim Hye-seon once went to the hospital before a recording of the sketch comedy show Gag Concert?
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Created by Wuju Daisuki (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Wuju Daisuki (talk) 22:18, 31 August 2024 (UTC).
- Comment: @Wuju Daisuki: The ALT0 hook is vague about why the comedian went to the hospital. Perhaps this was your intention, thinking it would draw people to visit the article in pursuit of the answer, but this also poses a problem for interestingness and hookyness. I recommend coming up with more hooks describing why she went to the hospital. I also note the word "skit" many times in the article when most (but perhaps not all) uses refer to a sketch. See skit vs. sketch for details. Viriditas (talk) 22:01, 23 September 2024 (UTC)