Template:Did you know nominations/Khirbet Zanuta

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The result was: promoted by Orlady (talk) 01:39, 10 August 2012 (UTC)

Khirbet Zanuta

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• ... that residents of the Iron Age village of Khirbet Zanuta near Hebron successfully petitioned against the planned demolition of their dwellings by the Israeli military authorities?

Created/expanded by Al Ameer son (talk), Nishidani (talk), Huldra (talk). Nominated by Al Ameer son (talk) at 19:28, 7 August 2012 (UTC)

• The articles meets requirements by far, hook is interesting. However, I'd suggest to rephrase it, as the case doesn't seem to be closed yet and "successful" is either unclear or original research. I'd suggest a small change, like the following one. --Nemo 00:11, 9 August 2012 (UTC)

  ALT1: ... that residents of the Iron Age village of Khirbet Zanuta near Hebron achieved a revision of the planned demolition of their dwellings by the Israeli military authorities?

• Al Ameer son (talk · contribs) has more than 5 DYK credits and is self-nominating here. Please perform QPQ peer review of another contributor's DYK nomination. Thanks. --PFHLai (talk) 00:36, 9 August 2012 (UTC)

  QPQ review done. Also, alternative hook is preferable and should be used. --Al Ameer son (talk) 03:17, 9 August 2012 (UTC)

• Article creator reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Siege of Gibraltar (1727) for QPQ. --Orlady (talk) 01:37, 10 August 2012 (UTC)