The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk) 08:12, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
Overall: (plagiarism free except of the quote of course! + the check just gives you how many the person did and not how they did vs. How many they nominated!)
I enjoyed reading this article. Overall, Well sourced (did not verify all references but checked up to the hook) although an image for the persona would have added more perspective. Nevertheless, Good work!
Let's brainstorm some hooks .. I will come back with some hook suggestions as the current one needs some work especially around the word “maintains” FuzzyMagma (talk) 17:18, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that Kemah Bob maintains a bipolar disorder and a drag king persona?
ALT2: ... that the American comedian Kemah Bob performs a drag king persona, Lil' Test Ease?
ALT3: ... that men's rights activist Lil' Test Ease is actually a woman? FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:42, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
@Launchballer:, you are actively editing but have not responded to the comments on this DYK. Can you please do so, or withdraw if you no longer wish to bring the article to DYK? ♠PMC♠ (talk) 20:43, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
To be honest, I saw this, wrote a QPQ for it, and then forgot to actually comment here. I'm not quite sure what the problem with the word 'maintains' is; I do know that none of the hooks proposed make grammatical sense. I propose the following:
ALT4: ... that the American comedian Kemah Bob performs a drag king act, Lil' Test Ease?--Launchballer 21:25, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
To be honest I'm not sure either. Speaking as a drive-by commentator, I think the original hook is fine as-is. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 21:51, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
Ok let's go by the original hookFuzzyMagma (talk) 22:41, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
(plagiarism free except of the quote of course! + the check just gives you how many the person did and not how they did vs. How many they nominated!)
I enjoyed reading this article. Overall, Well sourced (did not verify all references but checked up to the hook) although an image for the persona would have added more perspective. Nevertheless, Good work!
Let's brainstorm some hooks .. I will come back with some hook suggestions as the current one needs some work especially around the word “maintains” FuzzyMagma (talk) 17:18, 8 March 2023 (UTC)