Template:Did you know nominations/Kelsey Titmarsh

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 22:12, 6 August 2012 (UTC)

Kelsey Titmarsh

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... that Kelsey Titmarsh and the Canadian women's rhythmic gymnastics all-around group were the first to qualify for the Olympics?

Reviewed: Devendro Singh
Comment: ~~Can this please be included during the Olympics? The all-around's event final is tomorrow (July 31), which is short notice, but I'm hoping.~~ New date request, August 9, see below.

Created/expanded by Zanimum (talk). Self nom at 15:43, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

Only 1396 characters, and the paraphrasing of the citation that establishes her as part of the Canadian national team is a little close for comfort. IronGargoyle (talk) 22:12, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

Expanding the article. Which part is it, specifically, that you're referring to? -- Zanimum (talk) 23:37, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

Ah, I didn't click in that the prose portion didn't include the intro. By the way, turns out I suck at reading schedules: the rhythmic group doesn't perform until August 9. -- Zanimum (talk) 00:14, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to go now at 2686 characters and the phrasing in the article. It might be possible to make the hook a bit more clear concerning what they were the first to do, but otherwise this is fine. IronGargoyle (talk) 22:32, 4 August 2012 (UTC)