Template:Did you know nominations/Katja Wulff

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:00, 27 April 2019 (UTC)

Katja Wulff

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Drawing of Katja Wulff dancing

• ... that Katja Wulff from Hamburg learned Ausdruckstanz (depicted) from Rudolf von Laban, and ran her dance school in Basel still at age 90? Source: [1]
  • ALT1 ... that Katja Wulff, who learned Ausdruckstanz (depicted) from Rudolf von Laban, was still running her dance school in Basel at the age of 90?
    • ALT2 ... that Katja Wulff of Hamburg, who learned Ausdruckstanz (depicted) from Rudolf von Laban, was still running her dance school in Basel at the age of 90?

• Reviewed: Crinoid
• Comment: The drawing is after a historic photo (which can be seen in an external link), - don't know how to say that. - Article created as part of WIR's dance topic for April, so would be nice to show in April

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 11:42, 17 April 2019 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: A neat little article which is well structured and written. New enough, long enough and generally well sourced. However, the end of the second paragraph is uncited and that needs fixing before we can give the green light. I've also suggested a couple of stylistic tweaks at ALT1 to make the English flow more naturally. Bermicourt (talk) 17:25, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Fine ALT1, - I hoped to mention Hamburg to hint at the German/Swiss but we can't have it all. Please give me a bit of time, - a major source ended in a 404 error, but the German original author found an archived version. I'll have to check if Amalfi is mentioned there. Singing every day until Sunday, + nice weather, - I'm behind with many more pressing things. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:56, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

That's okay. And I don't mind Hamburg being put back in. I was just trying to make it a bit more punchy. I ought to have picked up the Swiss-German counterpoint, but feeling tired this Easter week, as you will be by the end of it no doubt, but at least you'll be able to say Christus ist auferstanden (if I have that right) and then rest! Bermicourt (talk) 21:09, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Bermicourt, I added that ref. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:49, 19 April 2019 (UTC)

I'm happy this is GTG with ALT3 which put Hamburg back into the hook. Bermicourt (talk) 21:00, 19 April 2019 (UTC)