Template:Did you know nominations/Karachi Kings
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:54, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
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Karachi Kings
[edit]- ... that Karachi Kings is the most expensive franchise team of Pakistan Super League?
Created by Anjana Larka (talk). Self-nominated at 10:30, 5 December 2015 (UTC).
I'm sorry but this article has a ways to go before it meets the criteria for a DYK. It is new enough and free of copyright violations, the hook is interesting, neutral, and short enough. However, the article is not long enough (only 590 characters of readable prose). My bigger concern is that the content of the article is not in the citations given. Neither source mentions the Karachi Kings at all. If you can add some more text, and find some new sources (these don't have to be in English, I think [1] has most of the info you used), then I think it would be good to go. Ashorocetus (talk | contribs) 06:12, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
- Reply Yes I know article is short but it is expanding day by day and will get a boost on 20 and 21 December when PCB will announce players for team. I have added some more (this and this and this) references that shows clear name of team Karachi Kings. Anjana LarkaTalk 06:43, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
- OK, thanks. It's much better now, but it's still not long enough for a DYK (DYK check says 590 characters of readable prose). Once it is, then I'll review it again. Ashorocetus (talk | contribs) 14:52, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
- Now??? Anjana LarkaTalk 10:14, 23 December 2015 (UTC)
Much better now. It's long enough, and everything else looks good. However, there is some issues with close paraphrasing in lead and in the Franchise History sections (see results from Earwig's copyvio detector). Some rephrasing should fix the problem. Ashorocetus (talk | contribs) 03:18, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
- I think this was copied from Wikipedia because it is created on 22 December and article is created before this, however I have replaced the wording and it should be approved now Anjana LarkaTalk 08:20, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
You know, you're probably right about that (sorry I didn't notice it). Anyway, all the issues are cleared up, this should be good to go. Ashorocetus (talk | contribs) 17:30, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
- I think this was copied from Wikipedia because it is created on 22 December and article is created before this, however I have replaced the wording and it should be approved now Anjana LarkaTalk 08:20, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
- Now??? Anjana LarkaTalk 10:14, 23 December 2015 (UTC)
- OK, thanks. It's much better now, but it's still not long enough for a DYK (DYK check says 590 characters of readable prose). Once it is, then I'll review it again. Ashorocetus (talk | contribs) 14:52, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
