Template:Did you know nominations/KUMA (Arizona)
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The result was: promoted by Montanabw(talk) 17:42, 3 January 2020 (UTC)
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KUMA (Arizona)
... that KFXY in Flagstaff, Arizona, was reported to be the first radio station in the world to be owned by a woman?Source
- Reviewed: The Beautiful World of Jeffree Star
Created by Raymie (talk). Self-nominated at 03:52, 30 November 2019 (UTC).
Article meets DYK requirements, no close paraphrasing was found, the hook is cited inline (I am assuming good faith as I don't have access to the source), and a QPQ has been done. I would suggest that the hook be revised slightly, as the article instead claims she was the "only" and not the "first" woman in the world to own a radio station; it might also be a good idea to attribute the claims to American papers for accuracy purposes. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:10, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Thanks for the comment. I'm going to strike the existing hook and reword: Raymie (t • c) 18:29, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that KFXY in Flagstaff, Arizona, was reported by American newspapers in 1925 to be the only radio station in the world to be owned by a woman?
Sounds good to go. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:10, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
Promoted with a minor grammatical correction to ALT1, took out one of the two "to be"s. Not a significant change, (promoter's discretion. ;) ).