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... that June Franklin was the first African American in an Iowa major political party to be elected as the Assistant Minority Leader of the Democratic House?
Source: "In recognition of her demonstrated leadership skills, she was elected during the 63rd General Assembly to the position of Assistant Minority Leader of the Democratic House. Franklin is the first African-American to hold such a leadership position in either major political party in Iowa." - Silag, Bill (2001). Outside In: African-American History In Iowa 1838-2000. State Historical Society of Iowa. pp. 349–350. ISBN0890330131.
Not a huge fan of the hook angle given that being an assistant minority leader doesn't seem as impressive being an actual minority leader. There do seem to be some other possible alternatives in the article so here they are:
ALT1 ... that Iowa politician June Franklin worked as an insurance agent and a real estate agent prior to entering politics?
ALT1a ... that Iowa state representative June Franklin worked as an insurance agent and a real estate agent prior to entering politics?
ALT2 ... that Iowa politician June Franklin wrote to 10 members of the US Congress urging them to declare Martin Luther King Jr.'s birthday a federal holiday?
ALT3 ... that state representative June Franklin addressed the nation from the Iowa State Capitol following the assassination of Martin Luther King Jr.?
Most partial to ALT1/ALT1a myself but I'll leave it to a reviewer. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:24, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
Narutolovehinata5 I agree that those are much better. Thank you. SL93 (talk) 00:32, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
Interesting:
QPQ: Done.
Overall: Nomination two days after creation. Size 2487 B. AGF offline source for ALT0, 1, and 1a. Prefer ALT2 over ALT3 over the others. ミラP@Miraclepine 00:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 00:18, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Nomination two days after creation. Size 2487 B. AGF offline source for ALT0, 1, and 1a. Prefer ALT2 over ALT3 over the others. ミラP@Miraclepine 00:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC)