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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 19:35, 20 September 2012 (UTC)

Jubho Lagoon

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... that Jubho Lagoon in Pakistan is home to a large number of individuals of the vulnerable Dalmatian pelicans (pictured)?

Reviewed: 4th self nom

Created/expanded by Samar (talk). Self nom at 09:04, 16 September 2012 (UTC)

IMO, large is subjective and the number 6000 should be added. OR maybe the hook could use "This is the largest strength of these birds found in Pakistan" fact. adding pictured. Image is good in quality and license. 2379 B size. Creation date and RS ref verified. --Redtigerxyz ^Talk 11:26, 16 September 2012 (UTC)

See the two alternates below, please tweak if necessary. Samar ^Talk 11:48, 16 September 2012 (UTC)

ALT 1: ... that Jubho Lagoon in Pakistan is home to around 6 thousand individuals of the vulnerable Dalmatian pelicans (pictured)?

ALT 2: ... that Jubho Lagoon is home to the largest strength of the vulnerable Dalmatian pelicans (pictured) found in Pakistan?

 any alt. --Redtigerxyz ^Talk 12:02, 16 September 2012 (UTC)