Template:Did you know nominations/Jordan Trail

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:34, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Jordan Trail

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The King Talal Dam in Jerash lies along the Jordan Trail.

... that the 650 km (400 mi) Jordan Trail, where Moses, Jesus, and Mohammad are believed to have walked, has been named as one of 2018's best tourist destinations in the world by National Geographic?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Isaac Komnenos (brother of Alexios I)

Created by Makeandtoss (talk). Self-nominated at 20:15, 13 March 2018 (UTC).

"To visit" is redundant - people go to destinations. - Sitush (talk) 21:54, 13 March 2018 (UTC)

The article is new enough, long enough and within policy regarding neutrality, sourcing and avoidance of close paraphrasing (Earwig rates it as a 4.8% likelihood). The hook is reasonably interesting, properly sourced and neutral. The image is appropriate and QPQ has been met. Minor tweaks were made to the hook. Perhaps a hook based on the quote "Jesus, Moses, and Mohammed all walked this path." (from "Places You Need to Visit in 2018" in National Geographic) might also be viable. Alansohn (talk) 01:23, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

@Alansohn: What do you think about merging both? Makeandtoss (talk) 05:03, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

Makeandtoss It only makes the hook that much more interesting. I would have suggested adding a new hook as ALT1, but I think that the revised ALT0 is properly sourced and verified. Still good to go. Alansohn (talk) 05:11, 21 March 2018 (UTC)