Template:Did you know nominations/Jon Midttun Lie

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 15:51, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

Jon Midttun Lie

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... that Norwegian footballer Jon Midttun Lie had Tom Nordlie as head coach in three different clubs?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ottla Kafka
Comment: 5x expansion

Created/expanded by Mentoz86 (talk). Self nom at 23:04, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

The article is 26x expanded within the last 6 days. It's long enough (obviously), neutral and adequately referenced. As for the hook, I don't like how it's not directly referenced and you have to look at three different places in the article to verify it, but nonetheless, all three are adequately referenced by Norwegian sources. Also the hook is short and interesting enough, so no problems there. Finally, the image is free and I believe it shows reasonably well in such a low size. Good job! – Kosm1 fent 08:32, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for your review and your feedback. I've fixed the issue, and the article now reads: Nordlie, who coached Midttun Lie at Sandefjord, Start and Lillestrøm[13] with an inline citation where it is mentioned. --Mentoz86 (talk) 09:35, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

Great, I wasn't absolutely sure about the previous version, but now it's fine! – Kosm1 fent 09:38, 20 October 2012 (UTC)