Template:Did you know nominations/Jointness and integration in the Indian military

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 17:52, 21 November 2020 (UTC)

Jointness and integration in the Indian military

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... that inter-services cooperation was one of the most important lessons of the Bangladesh war for India? Source: Air Chief Marshal (Retd) P. C. Lal wrote that, "The Bangladesh war demonstrated that the three Services working closely together were strong and decisive in their actions. Inter-Services cooperation was indeed the most important lesson of that war."
- ALT1:... that ...? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)

Reviewed: Vijayalakshmi Ramanan

Created by DiplomatTesterMan (talk). Self-nominated at 10:42, 28 October 2020 (UTC).

The article is long enough and new enough. I see no copyright violations. I assume good faith on the offline references. A QPQ has been completed. The hook is directly cited. The first 7 items under List of joint and integrated commands need to be referenced, despite them having articles. SL93 (talk) 19:03, 14 November 2020 (UTC)

References added. DTM (talk) 07:16, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

This is ready. SL93 (talk) 18:31, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this, but reading the first sentence of the lead feels like jumping into an ocean without a paddle. What is this article about? Please start with a statement of fact: Jointness and integration in the Indian military refers to ... Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 20:59, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

Pinging DiplomatTesterMan to fix Yoninah's issue with the lead. Just in case the talk page comment wasn't noticed. SL93 (talk) 20:47, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for the ping. I will make the changes asap. DTM (talk) 09:26, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Yoninah I just noticed that the lead was updated. SL93 (talk) 19:33, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

Yoninah and SL93, I have made more changes. I think this should do it now...? DTM (talk) 12:48, 21 November 2020 (UTC)

Yes, the lead reads much better, thanks. Restoring tick for online book source per SL93's review. Yoninah (talk) 17:49, 21 November 2020 (UTC)