Template:Did you know nominations/John Shelton (British Army officer)
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 14:45, 31 October 2015 (UTC)
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John Shelton (British Army officer)
[edit]... that the "imperious" and "tyrannical" Colonel John Shelton was so unpopular with his men that they gave three cheers when he died after falling off his horse?
ALT1:... that Colonel John Shelton survived the massacre of a 16,500-strong British Army column in Afghanistan, only to die after falling off his horse in Dublin?- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Georgie Wolton
- Comment: Two hooks suggested - take your pick.
Created by Prioryman (talk). Self-nominated at 21:56, 19 October 2015 (UTC).
Completely new article; easily long enough; referencing is fine; hook uses an offline source, but is definitely reliable; QPQ is done; no other obvious issues. Would love there to be an image, but I guess you can't have everything. Nice work, @Prioryman: I've just got a query with the hooks … I do think the primary hook is more likely to attract readers (it has an element of surprise – why was he so unpopular?), but from past experience I think the less complicated the hook, the better. How would you feel about trimming it slightly, as below? IgnorantArmies (talk) 11:45, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
- ALT2:... that Colonel John Shelton was so unpopular with his men that they gave three cheers upon hearing of his death?
- Yep, I'm fine with that. Thanks for the suggestion! I've stricken the other hooks. Prioryman (talk) 19:18, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
Great, good to go. IgnorantArmies (talk) 03:37, 31 October 2015 (UTC)
