Template:Did you know nominations/Jodi Arias: Dirty Little Secret

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:53, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

Jodi Arias: Dirty Little Secret

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... that for the film Jodi Arias: Dirty Little Secret, principle filming began as the trial was underway and its courtroom scenes were shot two days after the trial's conclusion?

Reviewed: James Ince
Comment: Article was created on June 15 and sent to AFD 77 minutes later when at 340 characters (55 words) "readable prose size". With the DYK clock stopped, my own contributions began on June 16 and continued through the "keep" of the article on June 22. The article had been brought up to 1809 characters (304 words) "readable prose size"... a 5x expansion of a new enough article. For hook sourcing, please refer to article's section Jodi Arias: Dirty Little Secret#Production

5x expanded by MichaelQSchmidt (talk), Corn cheese (talk). Nominated by MichaelQSchmidt (talk) at 06:38, 23 June 2013 (UTC).

ALT1: ... that Jodi Arias: Dirty Little Secret, the Lifetime TV project about the murder of Travis Alexander, began filming while the trial was ongoing and courtroom scenes were shot two days after the trial ended?

Length and age all good. QPQ done. Earwig tells us that this article is copyvio free. However, I think the book needs a bit of rewording. The trail of who? Unless one clicks on the wiki link, one would be left clueless as what "the trail" refers to. As such, I suggest ALT2: ... that principal filming for the film Jodi Arias: Dirty Little Secret began as the trial of Travis Alexander was underway and its courtroom scenes were shot two days after the trial's conclusion? ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 06:24, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
- A "glance" at ALT2 would have it appear that Travis Alexander was the person on trial. How about
ALT3: ... that Jodi Arias: Dirty Little Secret, the Lifetime film about the murder of Travis Alexander, began filming while Arias' trial was ongoing, with court scenes shot two days after the trial ended? Schmidt, ^{MICHAEL Q.} 15:17, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

ah, good. I tweaked ALT3 just a little. We are now good to go! Cheers, ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 01:34, 25 June 2013 (UTC)