Template:Did you know nominations/Jerusalem Foundation
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 00:29, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
Jerusalem Foundation
[edit]... that the city of Jerusalem, Israel would look very different today without the input of the Jerusalem Foundation?
- Reviewed: Wang Zigan
- Comment: 5x expansion
Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 21:37, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- Size and date check out. Hook is ok, but a little dry. I've made a suggestion below. ▫ JohnnyMrNinja 06:21, 30 April 2012 (UTC)- ALT1
... that the Jerusalem Foundation has funded over 2,000 projects, and has furnished playgrounds and flower gardens for nearly every Jerusalem neighborhood?
- Thanks for the quick review. I was looking for another ref, which I just found, to improve this hook. How about:
- ALT2: ... that before the establishment of the Jerusalem Foundation, there were hardly any parks or playgrounds in Jerusalem? Yoninah (talk) 08:43, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
- Yep, that's good. Who doesn't like parks? ▫ JohnnyMrNinja 18:26, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
- - Putting the check further down so it's suuuuper-clear. ▫ JohnnyMrNinja 20:46, 2 May 2012 (UTC)