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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 17:38, 2 February 2024 (UTC)

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Jenny Suo

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Created by Panamitsu (talk). Self-nominated at 02:49, 9 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Jenny Suo; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • Comment: The proposed hook is ungrammatical. It should be "...conducted a science experiment that resulted in ...". Paora (talk) 01:29, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
    Thanks, I've just changed it. —Panamitsu (talk) 02:27, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Very interesting article and hook! I only have a minor problem with the wording of the hook, which I think should say "at the age of 14" rather than "aged 14", which I think implies that she is currently that age. Grnrchst (talk) 15:42, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

@Grnrchst: Oh yes you're right. Here's ALT1:
"... that at age 14, Jenny Suo conducted a science experiment that resulted in Ribena pleading guilty to breaching consumer protection laws?"
—Panamitsu (talk) 01:28, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
Fabulous! Approved. :) --Grnrchst (talk) 10:58, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
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