Template:Did you know nominations/Jenny (orangutan)
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 11:04, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
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Jenny (orangutan)
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that Charles Darwin thought that Jenny's (pictured) reactions were child-like?- ALT1:... that Jenny (pictured) was the first ape that Charles Darwin met?
- Reviewed: Burkhard Driest
- Comment: 5x expanded since 24 Feb. Still finalising it
5x expanded by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 15:45, 29 February 2020 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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Overall: All good to go once a QPQ is done. Ergo Sum 18:51, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you @Ergo Sum:...May I ping you when I have a QPQ? Whispyhistory (talk) 18:59, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
- Of course. Ergo Sum 22:42, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you @Ergo Sum:...May I ping you when I have a QPQ? Whispyhistory (talk) 18:59, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
- Apologies @Yoninah:...I have amended. "Charles Darwin paid a visit to London Zoo where Jenny became the first ape that he met". On 28 March 1838, Charles Darwin came to the Zoo to see Jenny. It was his first sight of an ape. [1]. Whispyhistory (talk) 05:46, 17 March 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you. But honestly, I think you could do much more with the hook. It was also confusing to me at first why the image shows the ape dressed in children's clothes; I thought it was a parody. If you want to retain the mention of Darwin, you could write:
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... that Charles Darwin's visits to the London Zoo to see Jenny (depicted), an ape that displayed human-like reactions, reinforced his view that man was descended from animals?Yoninah (talk) 11:28, 17 March 2020 (UTC) - ALT1a: ... that Jenny's (depicted) human-like behaviour at London Zoo reinforced Charles Darwin's view that man was descended from animals? Philafrenzy (talk) 13:18, 17 March 2020 (UTC)