Template:Did you know nominations/Jenna Ortega

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 20:59, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Jenna Ortega

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Jenna Ortega

• ... that as a child, Jenna Ortega (pictured) spent up to 30 hours a week traveling to Los Angeles to attend auditions? Source: [1]
  • ALT1: ... that Jenna Ortega (pictured) almost quit acting to play soccer? Source: [2]
  • ALT2: ... that Jenna Ortega (pictured) appeared in three McDonald's commercials during her first year of acting? Source: [3]
  • ALT3: ... that Jenna Ortega (pictured) joined the cast of X because its script was "the most outrageous thing [she had] ever read"? Source: [4]
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Handwich, Template:Did you know nominations/Feetloaf
  • Comment: ALT0 is a bit WP:CALC, I think

Improved to Good Article status by Pamzeis (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 45 past nominations.

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Pamzeis (talk) 04:09, 28 March 2024 (UTC).

• New GA, well written. Some small suggestions:
  • Might be good to add half a sentence describing It's All Love
  • A lot of character names in the running text don't add anything; a description of who the character is would be better (as is done well for Yes Day, The Fallout). Relatedly, some works (After Words, Richie Rich, etc.) are missing genre labels which would be informative.
  • Some transitions between topics are abrupt; as just one example, ... offer true horror bona fides to this flick". Ortega starred in the slasher film ...
  • portraying her character's relatability: know what you mean, but phrasing seems off
  • her character's actions and dialogue did not suit her personality: actions and dialogue in just the script or as shot? Wednesday's personality or Ortega's? could clarify
  • described the material as risky: explain

But none of that holds up this nom. Photo OK. Hooks check out except ALT0, which yes, seems a little too far for WP:CALC. Incredible QPQs. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 23:41, 28 March 2024 (UTC)