Template:Did you know nominations/Jayanthi Kuru-Utumpala
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:13, 19 July 2020 (UTC)
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Jayanthi Kuru-Utumpala
... Jayanthi Kuru-Utumpala is the first Sri Lankan to summit the Mount Everest which she achieved it in 2016? Source: "Dailysports... that in 2016 Jayanthi Kuru-Utumpala became the first Sri Lankan to summit Mount Everest?
5x expanded by Abishe (talk). Self-nominated at 07:46, 30 May 2020 (UTC).
- There seems to be some grammatical issues with the hook. How about this one: "ALT1: ... that in 2016, Jayanthi Kuru-Utumpala became the first Sri Lankan to summit Mount Everest?" –IagoQnsi (talk) 02:43, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- I edited the above comment to include "ALT1:". The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 08:50, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
@IagoQnsi: Oh thanks for letting me know about my careless error in the hook. I will correct it. Abishe (talk) 14:47, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- - Article is new enough (expanded 30 May 2020)
- - Article is not a 5x expansion. The count went from 944 characters to 4525, which my copyedit brought down to 4429. You are a few sentences short (the target is 4,720).
- - Neutral, cites sources, does not appear to contain plagarism (passes Earwig and eye checks)
- - Hook is interesting and cited.
- - This would be their fifth DYQ, so QPQ is not required.
- - I have added in an image. It is freely licensed, the full size is used in the article, and looks good at 120px. Promoter: Note that uploading and adding to the article the original file are the uploader's only two contributions to any Wikimedia project.
- - Please ping me with {{ping|The Squirrel Conspiracy}} when the article has a few more sentences of content in it. The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 08:50, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for the comments and I will work out to add those sentences in order to match with the cut out. Give me a day to finish off my work. Abishe (talk) 19:46, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
@The Squirrel Conspiracy: I have added few sentences as per the suggestion made by you. I hope the article is pity ok. Cheers. Abishe (talk) 13:27, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
- Now long enough to be a 5x expansion. See above for rest of review. The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 18:39, 23 June 2020 (UTC)