Template:Did you know nominations/Jalila al-Salman
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:43, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
Jalila al-Salman
[edit]- ... that the vice-president of the Bahrain Teachers' Association, Jalila al-Salman, was sentenced to three years in prison for her involvement in the 2011-2012 uprising?
Created/expanded by Bahraini Activist (talk). Nominated by Carabinieri (talk) at 19:08, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Hook: Not referenced fully (vice president of BTA needs a ref). Short and interesting enough.
- Article: New enough, long enough, well referenced. Paraphrasing gives me pause (check the structure of this source and the article, for example. It's very similar.) This source is a bit better.
- Summary:
Referencing and paraphrasing issues. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:13, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
- This reference mentions she's BTA vice president. I believe the paraphrasing issue have been solved. Thanks for review. Mohamed CJ (talk) 23:07, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
- It wasn't referenced in the article. I've done so now. I'll take a look at paraphasing again soon. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:16, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
Paraphrasing looks acceptable now. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:22, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
- This reference mentions she's BTA vice president. I believe the paraphrasing issue have been solved. Thanks for review. Mohamed CJ (talk) 23:07, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
