Template:Did you know nominations/Izaac Hindom

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:44, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Izaac Hindom

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... that Izaac Hindom served as an advisor to four different presidents of Indonesia for almost fifteen years? Source: Izaac_Hindom#Member_of_the_Supreme_Advisory_Council

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Conopea galeata
Comment: This specific hook is interesting because it is rare to see someone advising four different presidents with a very different characteristics (from the dictator Suharto to the much more democratic successive presidents).

5x expanded by Jeromi Mikhael (talk). Self-nominated at 15:24, 25 December 2020 (UTC).

The lead needs to be expanded. The sentence under the Political career section - "as a member of the Daily Governance Body, which main task was to assist" - needs to be changed because it doesn't make sense. The 49th reference states "Between 6 August 1988 until 31 July 2003, exact duration 14 years, 11 months, and 25 days." as a source which I don't think works. The article is long enough and new enough. I assume good faith on the non-English references. SL93 (talk) 19:00, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

@SL93: Done and changed ref mention into notes. I propose a new hook with an English source in the article so you don't have to AGF. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 11:27, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
ALT1: ...that Izaac Hindom, a Papuan, actively promoted the assimilation between Papuans and Javanese and described Papuans as backward and egoistic? Source: #24 and #25 in the article Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 11:27, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

ALT1 is approved. You might want to add something to those two sources to let readers know that they are PDF files though. SL93 (talk) 18:38, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

@SL93: Done Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 00:31, 9 January 2021 (UTC)