Template:Did you know nominations/Ivan Štironja

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The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 08:00, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Ivan Štironja

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Ivan Štironja in 2009

... that the new bishop of Kotor in Montenegro Ivan Štironja (pictured) speaks Swahili and served as a missionary in Tanzania? Source: "Misijsku je djelatnost obavljao u župi Kaning’ombe u biskupiji Iringi u Tanzaniji (1988.-1992.) [He worked as a missionary in the parish of Kaning'ombe in the Diocese of Iringa in Tanzania (1988-1992)" ([1])
- ALT1:... that the new bishop of Kotor in Montenegro Ivan Štironja (pictured) originates from Herzegovina? Source: "Hercegovac i misionar iz Tanzanije biskup u zaljevu hrvatskih svetaca [A Herzegovinian and a missionary from Tanzania is the bishop in the Bay of Croatian Saints]" ([2])

5x expanded by Governor Sheng (talk). Self-nominated at 15:14, 22 May 2021 (UTC).

Expanded 5x since May 22, long enough at over 5,000 characters. Neutral, AGF regarding no plagiarism and if hooks are cited due to language use. Both hooks are fine; I have a slight preference for hook1. No copyvios regarding image, which is used in article's infobox. QPQ not required. I corrected a couple of typos and one grammar error (contractions aren't (har-har) considered encyclopedic writing. Prose is fine for DYK, but I suggest that you use WP:GOCE or WP:PR to help you tighten up your prose. Good luck. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 17:34, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Christine (Figureskatingfan), can you please add an icon indicating where the article/nomination stands? (Icons should go at the beginning of a post.) I'm reading this and can't tell whether this is an approval or a "still needs a bit of prose work" request. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:11, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Oops, of course. Thanks for the nudge. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 18:26, 14 June 2021 (UTC)