Template:Did you know nominations/Isabel Pell
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:32, 30 August 2017 (UTC)
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Isabel Pell
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Miss Isabel Pell, 1930, by Arnold Genthe
... that Isabel Pell, American socialite friend with many Gilded Age heiresses, fought with the French Resistance during World War II and was decorated with the Legion of Honour?Source: Isabel Pell Dies: Served in Maquis". The New York Times. 6 June 1952. ([1])- ALT1:
... that American socialite Isabel Pell rescued a contingent of American soldiers in France during World War II? Part of Free France, she came out from hiding and led the men to safety.Source: La Femme à la Mèche Blonde by Eve Pell, Ms. Magazine ([2])
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Created by Elisa.rolle (talk). Self-nominated at 12:30, 1 August 2017 (UTC).
Interesting life, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed and wonderful! - I'll need to return, after rehearsal, but a few things upfront:- * please no Miss and Mrs
- * please no sandwiching of text between images, - can you move her 1923 to a section where it fit's better than before she is born? Just a note: that is the mother not her. Elisa.rolle (talk) 18:09, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
- Can you think about how much each image is needed? ... smaller size? - The ratio of image to text seems a bit off. Infobox? Only suggestions. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:56, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
- I have removed the Miss or Mrs. I have removed 1 image and repositioned the other. If I have to sacrifice another one, the mother is the candidate. Elisa.rolle (talk) 18:32, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
- The best way to give the mother - thanks for clarifying! - would be more lead ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:56, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
- Made a slight edit to ALT1 to put "American socialite" before "Isabel Pell." --Usernameunique (talk) 06:30, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you. For clarity: only the first part works as a hook, we need to end on the question mark:
- ALT2: ... that American socialite Isabel Pell rescued a contingent of American soldiers in France during World War II? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:54, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
- good for me ALT2 Elisa.rolle (talk) 07:33, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
ALT2 --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:58, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
- good for me ALT2 Elisa.rolle (talk) 07:33, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
- Made a slight edit to ALT1 to put "American socialite" before "Isabel Pell." --Usernameunique (talk) 06:30, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
- The best way to give the mother - thanks for clarifying! - would be more lead ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:56, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
