The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:30, 9 November 2017 (UTC)
... that urban planner Robert Moses, examining sites for the Clearview Expressway in New York City during the 1950s, was said to have laughed at protesters whom he encountered? Source: Robert Caro, The Power Broker (1974), p.849
ALT1:... that urban planner Robert Moses was said to have laughed at protesters that he encountered while examining sites for the Clearview Expressway in New York City during the 1950s? Source: Same as ALT0
Overall: Waiting for QPQ, looks good otherwise. The ref #17 contains some better describtions of Moore getting a "kick out of" listening to people comparing him to dictators, maybe that can be added and used in a hook?Suggestion: ALT2: ... that urban planner Robert Moses could not stop laughing when listening to protestors he encountered while planning the Clearview Expressway in New York City during the 1950s?Or maybe something not connected to Moses at all like:ALT3: ... that New York's Interstate 295 was renamed "The 77th Infantry Division Expressway" in 2003? Regards SoWhy 19:32, 22 October 2017 (UTC)
@SoWhy: Thanks for doing the review, and sorry about the delay in responding. I guess ALT2 is fine. I will do a QPQ by tomorrow. epicgenius (talk) 02:16, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
@SoWhy: I have finished my QPQ. epicgenius (talk) 16:05, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
Sorry, I was on vacation. Looks good now, personally I prefer ALT2 but ALT0 and ALT1 are acceptable as well. I'll let the editor compiling the prep choose which they think is best. Regards SoWhy 08:14, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
- Not done
Waiting for QPQ, looks good otherwise. The ref #17 contains some better describtions of Moore getting a "kick out of" listening to people comparing him to dictators, maybe that can be added and used in a hook?Suggestion: ALT2: ... that urban planner Robert Moses could not stop laughing when listening to protestors he encountered while planning the Clearview Expressway in New York City during the 1950s?Or maybe something not connected to Moses at all like:ALT3: ... that New York's Interstate 295 was renamed "The 77th Infantry Division Expressway" in 2003? Regards SoWhy 19:32, 22 October 2017 (UTC)
