Template:Did you know nominations/Huawei Ascend P7
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:37, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
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Huawei Ascend P7
[edit]... that the Huawei Ascend P7 has been noted for its high-resolution front camera and slow processor?
- Reviewed: Lake Glory
Created by SSTflyer (talk). Self-nominated at 08:42, 16 November 2015 (UTC).
I'm applying good faith that someone will change the hook to mention that the Huawei Ascend P7 is a smartphone, as it is not obvious. Article quality is sufficient, and the hook is neutral (it takes both a positive and negative property). These properties were also mentioned by more than one source. Jolly Ω Janner 01:42, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
Jolly Janner, I'm sorry, but before you approve a hook, it should be in the form it will be when promoted. The AGF tick typically means that the source for the hook is offline, so as the hook fact could not be checked, it is being accepted in good faith. (Sometimes this is used if the hook source is online, but much of the article's sourcing is not.) Also, "article quality is sufficient" is not specific enough a review at DYK. Please be sure to state those DYK criteria that the article has met (or not): length, newness, neutrality (done in this case), sourced, free of copyvio/close paraphrasing, and so on. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 11:57, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
- @Jolly Janner: ALT1
... that the Huawei Ascend P7 smartphone has a high-resolution front camera and a slow processing unit?sst✈(discuss) 15:39, 20 December 2015 (UTC)
- @Jolly Janner: ALT1
as its camera resolution and processing units are opinions I would stick to the term "has been noted". Article is over 1,500 characters and created 16 November and nominated on same day. Every paragraph except the lead has at least one inline citation (additionally at the end of the sentence for hook info) and Earwig's Copyvio Detector was clear. Jolly Ω Janner 08:06, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
- ALT2
... that the Huawei Ascend P7 smartphone has a "high-resolution" front camera and a "slow" processing unit?sst✈(discuss) 13:24, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
- @SSTflyer: I'm not keen on the use of quotation marks. The original blurb was fine but just need to have "smartphone" added to it. Jolly Ω Janner 01:36, 28 December 2015 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that the Huawei Ascend P7 smartphone has been noted for its high-resolution front camera and slow processor? sst✈discuss 02:25, 28 December 2015 (UTC)
