Template:Did you know nominations/Huang Jing

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:49, 24 December 2015 (UTC)

Huang Jing

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Huang Jing

... that Chinese politician Huang Jing (pictured), the father of a top Communist leader and a top intelligence officer who defected to the US, was married to Madame Mao?

Reviewed: Zhao Wenhua

Created by Zanhe (talk). Self-nominated at 04:57, 1 December 2015 (UTC).

The article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and it has inline citations. The hook is short enough, correctly formatted, aqquarate, and interesting. QPQ is done, and the image is OK too. Yet, the nomination can't pass at this point as a WP:COPYVIO violation was detected: the first paragraph of the article's Biography section is copied word to word from the source. When this paragraph is rewritten, the nomination can pass. Hansi667 (Neighbor Of The Beast) ^{a penny for your thoughts?} 13:55, 3 December 2015 (UTC)

@Hansi667: how was the first paragraph a "word to word" copy from source? Every single sentence had been paraphrased. However, having re-read the source, I do realize the sentence structure was too similar to the source, and I've further reworded the paragraph. -Zanhe (talk) 05:27, 4 December 2015 (UTC)

I just wanted to put empasis on the close paraphrasing issues, but on on the other hand word to word means means, ehhhm, word to word, which was not 100% accurate. Anyway, following the last edits, I think the issue was addressed and the hook is good to go. Hansi667 (Neighbor Of The Beast) ^{a penny for your thoughts?} 07:54, 4 December 2015 (UTC)